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Reviews For A Life Unsettled
Title: Isolated 05 Feb 2011 4:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! That's just too tragic. I can't believe that Lucius is being nice to him. Nice change though, having a decent Lucius.

    I really hope that Snape comes around though. Harry can't handle much more.

    Great chappie
Title: Crash 05 Feb 2011 4:06 am
Reviewer: sweetevilbunies (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think Harry should be either home schooled or moved into Snapes rooms and tutored there. I also think the following punishments be given to all who signed that paper.

    One: Ron looses his prefect status.
    Two: The school is informed of how Griffindor has behaved and the house sanctioned.
    Three: The signers are voted on by the school and sentenced to be shunned by the school. Placed in there own "punishment" dorm and not allowed any attachment to Griffindor. (ties change to plain black, not allowed to attend Griffindor functions, made to sit at separate tables, ect.
Title: Crash 05 Feb 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that Severus would not be himself without having to work with Harry to face things together. Sending him to Dumstrang wouldn't help as it would be "running".

    I think an idea might be send him back to Hogwarts. If those that did not sign refused to then they should help as well. I also think that maybe if Harry slipped back again into depression then take him out to home school.

    Only spitting out ideas.

    Update soon
Title: Crash 05 Feb 2011 3:59 am
Reviewer: AshleyAnesthetic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay I would like to see him atleast try to go back to Hogwarts. The other options are interesting and I wouldn't mind seeing them as long as Severus is a teacher!
    Keep up the good work!

    - :) Ash
Title: Common Place 05 Feb 2011 3:55 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Poor Harry. Will Snape ever soften up towards him. I hope so. The poor boy can't take much more.
Title: Crash 05 Feb 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: Drayconette (Signed) [Report This]
    It really would seem like running away if Harry doesn't go back. As much as it could hurt him, I would like to think he's a survivor, and with at least one friend and supportive guardian, he would be strong enough to face the hard times like he has before.
Title: Crash 05 Feb 2011 3:42 am
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    I vote they go back to Hogwarts. Harry still has friends in those that didn't sign and I'd like to see some interaction between them and Harry. Also, it would be amusing what exactly the headmaster does to those that did sign.
Title: Paternis Sentimentis 05 Feb 2011 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great start JA.

    Poor Harry. I really hope that Snape comes around. Harry "does" deserve a family. Even if it "is" Snape! LOL!
Title: Draco 05 Feb 2011 3:24 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    AWWWWWWWWWWWW! *me hugs Draco and Harry* I love this chapter. im glad Draco is there for Harry, when everyone else abandoned him. and that last wish! *hugs Draco again* can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Old Wounds 05 Feb 2011 2:51 am
Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The relationship between Harry and Severus is developing but in hits and misses - as it should be. Harry doesn't know what it like to have a healthy relationship with a father-figure and Severus doesn't either. The blind leading the blind one might say. BTW, love the idea of Snape in an IKEA - fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Lol, your comment just made me laugh about Snape being in an IKEA.  I hadn't thought about how odd that would be.

     

    Thanks for your review.


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