Reviews For Among The Gemini Trees
Keep up the lovely writing. :3
That teacher, however, doesn't know how to teach drawing. XD You don't hand paper to a kid and say, "Here, draw." Just doesn't teach anything. Having taught drawing myself to a small class of 5 students that ranged from 8 to 16 year olds, the thing about teaching drawing is having success. If you're trying to teach how to draw faces, you start with the basics and teach them how to draw the eyes first - step by antagonizing step. (And of course, they all go at different paces) LOL
However, when I was a child, I attended a drawing class and that teacher didn't teach very much.
So, maybe I'm the only one to teach like that. XD But after teaching for a few years, I found it was the way to go.
Anyhoo, I'm loving the story. What would I like to see? Hmmm, I'd love for Snape to see the bruises on Harry's back. I'd also think there should be a cabin check for cleanliness and Snape discovering that Harry doesn't have the essentials for sleeping. Like, him being all eager to find something wrong with Harry's cabin, only to find it in perfect order and missing things. And, of course, I'd love for him not to be his perfectly nasty self when he sees all this. LOLOLOL.
Author's Response: That was just the first day of class and he wasn't teaching them anything yet. It was just so they could see a comparision at the end of school, of what they used to draw like compared to after they learned everything. I took a drawing course in college and we did that. On the first day we drew a self portrait, and then on the last day we did a self portrait and compared side by side and boy what a difference! I was glad they had us do that :)
Author's Response: read ch 4 :)
I would like to see.....Snape eat his words.
I'm totally mad at Snape the git now.
I like Harry's pink notebook. A nice detail.
And well, I hope he shows Snape and everyone else that he deserves to be there.
And I hope Snape finds out that Harry is not the teacher or headmaster's pet and Dumbles did not pay for Harry.
And i hope that when he realizes what harry did to get his suplies, he'll have a new respect for harry.
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