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Title: Chapter 6 26 Jan 2021 5:20 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes I enjoyed it very much too! I would think that social services would wonder why Snape didn’t have custody to begin with. It would be odd for a caring father to give up custody without a good reason.
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2021 5:30 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I could tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter but words just simply won't do it justice.

    I'm giddy to find out what happens when Severus and Harry meet. And I SO want him to lay in to Dumbledore, and I want the Dursely's to get their comeuppance, and...and and and, so MANY THINGS I want to see happen!

    I love this story - I love the whole premise. I had the same seizures he had when I was a baby, by the way. They treated me with Valproic acid.

    I could ramble on about that for even longer, but I just - I love the detail you go in to about everything. Especially with the way magic is reacting to the muggle hospital - when not warded/prepared properly.

    I've found myself wondering a bit about muggle hospitals and wizards, like what if there were a whole slew of muggle doctors who were aware of magic and were able to work on treating them, or every time they found a magic child they were able to follow protocols or something.

    Anyways, I'm rambling. Sorry.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2021 5:30 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I could tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter but words just simply won't do it justice.

    I'm giddy to find out what happens when Severus and Harry meet. And I SO want him to lay in to Dumbledore, and I want the Dursely's to get their comeuppance, and...and and and, so MANY THINGS I want to see happen!

    I love this story - I love the whole premise. I had the same seizures he had when I was a baby, by the way. They treated me with Valproic acid.

    I could ramble on about that for even longer, but I just - I love the detail you go in to about everything. Especially with the way magic is reacting to the muggle hospital - when not warded/prepared properly.

    I've found myself wondering a bit about muggle hospitals and wizards, like what if there were a whole slew of muggle doctors who were aware of magic and were able to work on treating them, or every time they found a magic child they were able to follow protocols or something.

    Anyways, I'm rambling. Sorry.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Title: Chapter 4 17 Jan 2021 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter, at least Harry’s magic is still working
Title: Chapter 3 17 Jan 2021 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow a very full chapter, I love the bludgeoned comment from Harry
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jan 2021 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    An intriguing start thank you
Title: Chapter 4 13 Jan 2021 12:01 am
Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to read the Continuous
Title: Chapter 2 09 Jan 2021 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! What a cliffhanger! I loved reading the descriptions of what Harry went through. They were very vivid.

    I also enjoyed your Snape. He is very in character. They both are. Well done!

    But what is going on with Harry? Is he kidnapped?

    Thanks for writing and posting! Please update when you can!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2021 4:58 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that James knew and was okay with it all. I appreciate reading the backstory first. It's a nice way to start a story.
Title: Chapter 2 09 Jan 2021 3:54 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!!! Looking forward to reading more!

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