Ahhh, no! Listen to Elly please! The storm is coming.
Oh that was perfect! I loved the surprise visit. So nicely done and so uplifting.
Thanks for all of the important Covid work you’re doing, by the way. We’re beyond grateful for everything all of our amazing medical folks have been doing throughout the whole pandemic.
Lupin’s insight into the potion is so cool! I wonder how that will be used to help Elias. I love how Sirius is admirably rising to his task.
Terrific chapter! There was so much here to digest - the static electricity, the Dark Lord finding their connection, Lupin’s research into the undesirable uses of Muggle innovation, Frank’s uncanny understanding of Elias’s plight. It was a great chapter!
Yay, what a great moment! That honesty feels like such a relief. I really appreciated Snape’s explanation of Elias’s condition. It was most enlightening. I’m looking forward to that major plot line face slam!
Dumbledore is so coldly calculating. He gives me the chills. Remus in the Muggle world was hilarious! I’m looking forward to all the threads coming together!
This was a great, but definitely depressing, chapter! From Sirius being heartbroken, to Snape having to keep himself together, to Elly’s challenges at the end, this chapter was a downer, indeed. Looking forward to the chaos ahead.
I love your inclusion of the Native American tale. It’s fits so well, and was very thought-provoking in its ties to Harry’s research project.
It’s gratifying to see Severus confiding in Lupin, after verifying his trustworthiness. He can be a good ally and source of support.
It was only a matter of time before she figured it out, but I’m afraid with more people suspecting, it will become harder to protect Elias.
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