I am soo invested in this story! I can't wait to see where it goes. Please update soon!
Noooooooo
How am I going to survive without knowing what happens?
Okay. I’m calm now.
And absolutely loving the intricacies of this.
Roll on more.
So the fun starts! Just a thought - will the super-toxic quantity of Fulgur will aid his Shervil's? (same treatment then to the Longbottoms) Must go back and review previous chapters...
Keep 'em coming!
| Title: Chapter 44
| 15 Nov 2021 6:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter! I understand why you call this the Chaos Arc. Has anyone noticed the dead snake? Will this alert Voldemort to Elias being Harry?
| Title: Chapter 43
| 15 Nov 2021 6:03 pm
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Wow! I’m worried about what this will do for the cover story that has been created. Thank you so much for a brilliant chapter
| Title: Chapter 44
| 14 Nov 2021 11:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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So they're going to hook him up to a machine in a muggle hospital that will give him continuous electricity? If I'm understanding I mean. That'll certainly put remus and Elias on the magical map for their research if it works! I can't figure Dumbledore or voldemort being dumb or oblivious enough to not work this out now -- super magic kid somehow knows a snake is in the ministry and is able to apparate in and kill it in time to save the father of harry potters best friend? Yeah the secrets toast. Can't wait to see the chaos keep unraveling! Awesome chapter
I can't say much. there is too much to unpack! I just am hopeful the next part is coming soon.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Very much obliged for you to continuing this.
| Title: Chapter 43
| 17 Oct 2021 3:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh dear me, it's all over. There's no possible way to explain Elias being there or having the vision or knowing thr snake was there without Dumbledore finding out that he is harry potter. And since voldemort was likely watching through naginis eyes, he probably has a good look at Elias. He might not know who he is just yet but he'll know the boy is a threat and he might be too insane to put it together (hopefully) but one of his death eaters like Lucius isn't. Oh man when you say chaos you really *mean* it. I wanna be angry at frank for encouraging something that reckless. And I wanna be mad at Elias for putting himself (not to mention snape) in this position with no good possible outcomes. But that's who he's always been anyway isn't it? And I'm just too plum happy that frank and Alice really aren't as far gone as the healers think -- they are more aware and capable than they've let on and I think they're going to be a big help in severus figuring out how to help Harry's shervil condition. After all, they're in there because of the cruciatus too right. Anyway, great chapter. I for one couldn't stop reading
Author's Response: Yeah, there's going to be a lot of fall out from this one, but we'll deal with that when we come to it. As is, we just need to keep him alive. I told you it's going to be chaos! Yeah, Frank and Alice aren't totally there, but they're not totally gone either. And yes, they're in St. Mungo's because of the Cruciatus curse canonically. Fun fact, this fic was originally going to be a 'lets cure them!' fic, but that went off the rails a while back (partially because I let the ethics of what I was planning to do to Frank and Alice get in the way). There is a secondary plan, but its much less Longbottom-centric.
I love this story, and can't wait for more! I just read all 43 chapters and had trouble putting it down.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taking me so long to put out the next chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far though!
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