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Title: Chapter 1 Winter Carol 08 Feb 2022 2:13 am
Reviewer: MagnificentAndStrange (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like your idea! I'm very curious to see where this story goes. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 1 Winter Carol 07 Feb 2022 9:41 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the start! Poor Harry. He must be so cold and hungry by now.

    I love that Snape loves to bake. I bet it might be something Snape and Harry share as things they both like to do.

    So when Snape told his relatives he had a child when he was younger, was he telling the truth? Or was he lying?

    Thanks for writing and posting! I'd love to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. Heh, he is and he's upset that his relatives would leave him alone as well as still being overwhelmed concerning Hogwarts closing and being worried about how he's going to fund his education at a new school.  Yet there's also some joy at being away from his relatives which he isn't sure how to feel about, what with other things (the school closing mainly) occupying his mind.  

    Yeah, I don't think I've read many stories that involve Severus knowing to bake.   Imagine Severus baking cookies for Christmas with Harry.  Well, that may be based more on the christmas tradition in my family where mom and us girls get together and bake cookies during Christmas.  Grandmom used to as well but she doesn't do much baking anymore.  I'm hoping it will turn out to be something they can bond over. 

     I think in this story, Severus told the truth, however the child passed away when young.  Now normally, Arastos will be Snape's son from Lily (older half-brother of Harry) but in this one I think perhaps he had a different child altogether that died possibly in infancy or early childhood.  I'm not planning on Arastos being in this one.   

    I'll try to work on a second chapter for the story.

Title: Chapter 1 Winter Carol 04 Feb 2022 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A very good start to the story and a lovely choice of carols

    Author's Response: Thank you and glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 1 Winter Carol 31 Jan 2022 3:54 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific start to your story! Thanks for this wonderfully long opening chapter. I like the premise of the Just Pretending challenge, and am enjoying your take on it. I also love the way you intertwined old Carols into your story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you and glad you are enjoying it.  You're welcome and yes, I flipped through some others, rather surprised how short the entries were but it was something I wanted to do for a while as I didn't make it in time for the fall challenge of last year.  I thought the carols were something that would make it unique so tried to look up old ones that Severus might have potentially learned, possibly from Lily as children or that he might have heard before Hogwarts.  Wanted to post it during or close to Christmas but alas the chapter gave me some problems, but what else is new yes? XD  Hopefully I can fulfill your expectations as well as future potential readers. 

Title: Chapter 1 Winter Carol 31 Jan 2022 2:38 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    Continue pls!!

    Author's Response: I plan on doing so.  Got a couple other stories to update before working on the second chapter.

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