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Title: Chapter 17 20 Mar 2008 2:53 pm
Reviewer: ailam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hallo, I like your story so much. I am from Slovakia and I would like to translate your story to slovak. I want to ask you, if I can. Then I would like to publish your story on my web page uneder your name of course.If you concur in it, please, write me on ailam@centrum.cz thank you so much.
Title: Chapter 17 18 Mar 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter and also like the way Severus doesn't attempt to shield harry from the bad news by pretending he's too young to understand, kids understand a lot more than we think they do and they can also handle a lot more bad news than we think they can. I think the best policy when dealing with a child is honest, as much as possible, unless there's a very good reason to keep the truth from them.

    Love the cat, by the way! I always put animals in my stories, my current Harry Snape story has a little beagle in it!
Title: Chapter 17 17 Mar 2008 5:45 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for replying to my last review--or should I say rant. Your story is quite realistic in that Harry may never recover from what has happened to him so far. In real life, we don't. It usually comes out as feeling of low self-worth, or self-sabatague, lack of care of ones-self, poor social relationships or inability to form any, and the list can go on and on. I guess I'm just used to things usually working out in the Potterverse. Molly is really coming across as an adoptive mother to Harry. That evil smirk on Severus' face was quite telling. But even if he disallows the previous relationship since he is the father, what will happen??? Since Sirius escaped the first time to get Peter, will it be the same in your 'verse? I look forward to all these answers and more. Same bat time, same bat channel--or whenever it becomes available!!!!
Title: Chapter 17 17 Mar 2008 4:28 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    thank you for another great chapter! i really like your decision to bring in sirius. I don't think I reviewed the last chapter and just wanted to mention here that I liked they way you portrayed Harry's reaction to Snape not showing up... and in this chapter you mention that he STILL has his secret biscuits drawer. He loves to be loved but oh, he is so insecure still! Very good portrayal and I continue to enjoy the evolution of Harry's trust in Snape as well as Snape's protectiveness of his son.

    This is getting soooo interesting!!! Hope you will have more soon :D
Title: Chapter 17 16 Mar 2008 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story, so sweet, bit over dramatic but hey its alternative universe stuff so i'm not complaining,I need something light to end the day with. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 17 16 Mar 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i quite agree happitude should be a word, anyway what a great chapter and sirius so close to hogwarts, harry had snape had better be on there guard
Title: Chapter 17 16 Mar 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Sirius!... If he's good in this one, that is. I love that man :D But, I'm anxious to see what's going to happen now, since we don't know if he's good or bad, and Severus wanting to protect Harry. Ack! This is exciting! I can't wait for more :D
Title: Chapter 17 16 Mar 2008 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun... Sirius Black has escaped! I'll bet Severus will be on over-protective mode now! Lovely chapter and I hope you'll find time to write another again soon!
Title: Chapter 17 16 Mar 2008 11:19 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa!!!! I loved the chapter and though I thought that Mrs. Weasley was a bit too domineering, all in all, it was wonderful chapter. Hope you get time to update soon. And I think that 'happitude' would be a great word. :)
Title: Chapter 15 04 Mar 2008 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Jo F. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this story is fantastic! I love how Severus and Harry are both learning what it means to have someone love them.

    The characters are developed nicely, and nobody seems out of character at all. Everybody seems spot-on, and I can hear them talking in my head, which is always a good sign for me!

    I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!

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