Reviews For Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape
Watch your grammer I found a few mistakes. Other then that AWESOME
If Sev winked at me I think I'd die XD
I also think Harry should be let to fly a broom stick!
Yay! The sequel is here! I was so excited to see the Opening Feast. There's nothing like the start of a new year at Hogwarts. Whatever else it may be, you know it's going to be exciting.
It's good to see Charlie Weasley again, but I hope Harry isn't going to be disappointed. Charlie is a good kid and I'm sure he'll be willing to spend some time with Harry, but he'll be busy with classes and will probably want to spend time with friends his own age, too.
So Harry is interested in dragons, still. Well, that's something he and Hagrid have in common, although if Hagrid had his way, they'd find out more about dragons than they bargained for, I think.
Poor Harry for being nervous for the first-years about to be Sorted. In his experiences, bad things are quite common. After all, he was with the Dursleys for years and has only been with his father for a few weeks.
It's great to see Snape being so protective and loving, though. He's a great dad here, in spite of his insecurities. I wonder if he'll still his mean snarky self in Potions class now. It might be a little tougher to intimidate students now that they've seen him cuddling little Harry. I'm sure Snape could have them quaking in their boots with a little effort though.
And the food sounded yummy. I was getting hungry just reading about it.
And then Filch had to spoil it all. I'd definitely keep a close eye on Harry if I were Snape. Filch is the type to hold a grudge, even if the confrontation between him and Harry was all his own fault. He sounds like he's looking for revenge.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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