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Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter! I'm so proud of Harry for being able to articulate how he was treated by the Dursleys. He is a courageous kid, and it also shows how much Severus has helped him, too.

    I loved that Severus was able to hear Harry calling him through their bond and that Dumbledore knew where to go. The reunion between Harry and Severus was wonderful and I'm just so glad that they are together again.

    Poor Sirius though. He did mean well, though he went about it all wrong, but how awful for him to have to hear about how Harry has been mistreated so terribly. Now he has to accept that Severus is actually very good for Harry and is his father...we'll see how he does with that, but maybe it will help him that Harry explained how good Severus has been to him.

    I'm sorry that this story is nearly done, but if you have another part planned, that's excellent news!

    Author's Response: Hi Kristeh!  Yes, I have a Part Three planned . . . well, planned maybe putting it too strongly.  I have it in mind, maybe?  I still haven't decided who they'll be "In Search Of" but it'll come to me, I betcha.  Maybe it'll be "In Seach of Peter."  You know, to clear Sirius' name.  Dunno.  But thank you for your review, and yes, Sirius has a lot to deal with now, but in some small way, it was . . . cathartic for Harry that this happened.
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great. I really don't want Sirius chopped into small pieces. Also, Peter needs to be found.

    But even if Sirius is proved innocent, they will be serving hot tea in hell before Severus lets him close to Harry.

    I so enjoy this.

    Author's Response:

    No hot tea in hell?  Hmm, what about Pomegranate lemonade?  (I have an original story set in Hell, where one of the characters (Adonis) is baking cookies and serving up Pomegranate lemonade . . . because it's funny.)  But I understand your point, and yes, it'll be a cold day, or at least, very chilly, before certain individuals are allowed near certain others.  But maybe Part three of the series (as I just mentioned above) will be "The Seach for Peter". 

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:36 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter; I really like the way Sirius finally starts listening, and huzzah for Harry being told the whole story behind his 'adoption'. I can't wait to find out what happens to Sirius :D

    Author's Response: Sirius is going to be facing a full on Snape Wrath before the day is through.  He may even live through it.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Harry is safe again! I'm glad he and Severus were reunited. I am curious to see what happens to Sirius next. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm working on Better Be Slytherin! first, but I should get back to Whelp soon.
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really nice chapter. I do hope Sirius gets cleared and gets to be a friend/godfather to Harry. I've always loved Sirius.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Sirius can be kind of cool.  I'm not certain how close their relationship will be, but he will get to be part of Harry's life, in some way.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw! I'm so glad he's safe.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!  I figured three chaps of angst was enough. :)
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! An Update!

    Author's Response: You're welcome!  :)
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:11 am
Reviewer: Talon3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a good chapter. I am so glad Severus and Harry got back together. Now I just feel sorry for Sirius. Please tell me something good ends up happening to Sirius.

    Author's Response: Well, I won't give any spoilers, except to say Sirius doesn't die for this.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 21 11 Aug 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: ML (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You always leave us at a terrible place! Thanks for updating quickly. Love the story.
Title: Chapter 21 06 Aug 2008 2:19 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was a brilliant chapter, and it worked really well showing Treacle's POV to begin with; I love the way she describes Harry as Her Boy.

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