Draco be like: I messed with Neville's not my own! I don't know how to make it lie, I just know how to make it not work!
Slytherins and Gryffindors be like: WTF just happened? Nobody knows? Okay, least we're all just equally confused.
Snape: having a meltdown off stage.
Harry: having a meltdown ON stage.
Terrific sequence with Harry and Spas! I would love to see how their time at Durmstrang unfolds, but am also happy to have read this much.
This is a great story, even if heartbreaking. I feel pulled into the hopeless depths with Harry, as he feels a palpable rejection and scorn. Hopefully there is light ahead.
| Title: Durmstrang Institute for the Magically Gifted
| 09 Nov 2021 4:36 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed)
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Oh, dear! To be continued... Just when I was really getting into the details of a new culture and new school! Really love how you've created a new locale for Harry and Draco. Also suspect that Snape himself may run afoul of various aspects of their new host country's customs at some point, and won't that be a true learning experience for ALL!!! Hope to see this story continued in the future, but am privileged to have read this much! (And that mysterious hole... 😆)
Wow! Stunning! Absolutely stunning! I could almost SEE Harry during that defense scene! And Snape's reaction! I wasn't sure if I liked the idea of Harry going to Durmstrang, but this looks like a pretty awesome opportunity for him! Can't wait to see what happens to Harry and Draco next!
AAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!! Poor Harry, who obviously has far more emotional capacity than a teaspoon, to be feeling all those conflicting emotions simultaneously, but--thankfully, WONDERFULLY!--he now has the emotional anchor that he's always needed and longed for. Way to GO, Severus!
A ROCK??!!! Geee, Draco... Actually, I've been mentally holding Draco at arm's length, until the ending of this chapter. Now I can officially say, "Awwwww..." 😊
"Dangling like an awkward doll on a string..." Wow! That was great foreshadowing in Chapter 1! I'm really caught up in all of Harry's angst... But will Snape actually feel remorse? Of any kind? Clicking on NEXT..
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"...hope dangling on a string,like the slow spinning redemption he'd always wanted..." I love your turns of phrase! Terrific opening chapter!
| Title: Durmstrang Institute for the Magically Gifted
| 30 Jan 2021 11:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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A mi me gusta mucho esta historia, me encantaría que la retomaras algún dia :D
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