ARGH! Snape is so... SO NASTY! How can he be so cruel? And though it's nice, I"m still wondering how Lucius can be so... nice? Is there an ultimate motive behind his actions?? I hate Harry being so sad, and i absolutely adore the way you can turn Ron (how could you!!!) against Harry, and then manipulate the whole situation with a few simple sentence yet picturing perfectly Harry's sad state... Fantastic. Really really fantastic.
Suspense! There's so much of it it's driving me insane. But well done on these few chapters (since I last reviewed).
I look forward to future chapters and a resolution to the suspense (hopefully)!
OMG. As wonderful as ever. That was an awful way to start the story, keeping all of us(well, at least me) biting our nails and lips, crossing our fingers waiting for more, wondering what will happen... ARGH. Wonderful wonderful wonderful.
its really good
you actually update really quickly :D
I hope that things are gonna get better for harry and severus now
please update soon
I wonder how the malfoys will be with Sev now or how they will treat Harry I do not see them as the oh poor harry type not really but I will see where you take it . More Pleas eand thank for such a fast update!
Oh poor Harry and sev. Nice touch with Draco *S*
Can someone please just slap Snape for me? Really hard? Idiot. Great chapter.
I love your story. Was incredibly grateful that the update from the last chapter came so swiftly. The way you portray Harry feeling is just so realistic and clear. And on a side-note, both the 'mood song' and quotes fit really well.
Anyway, it is stories like this one that keep me reading fanfiction. Great story.
||04 Feb 2011 5:07 am
|Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
Sweet and full of angst simulataneously. I love the humanity that the Malfoys showed Harry; it's just too sad that others couldn't see that Harry was still Harry regardless of his parentage. I hoping for a happily-ever-after for the two Snapes and a little "look at me now" revenge for Harry by the time the next school year begins. This is a different lovely story. Thanks
|Title: Paternis Sentimentis
||04 Feb 2011 4:55 am
|Reviewer: lex (Anonymous)
Harry seems a bit needy, but overall, a decent start.