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Reviews For A Life Unsettled
Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 4:22 am
Reviewer: Paganaidd (Signed) [Report This]
    "There had been no funeral or memorial service, nor had there been any mourners."

    This is the worst condemnation a person can receive. Bravo for Severus realizing it and deciding to do something before the same could be said of him.

    This story has really caught me. Excellent work.
Title: Inside Out 04 Feb 2011 4:14 am
Reviewer: Paganaidd (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you capture that peculiar "I've made up my mind, so I feel better" that is common in suicidal people.

    Probably, from the outside, it looked like Harry was starting to take an interest in things again (showing up for class etc). The assumption by people who aren't aware of how depression and suicidality can look would be that he was just coming out of it gradually.

    I also like that Draco gets it when Harry gives him his Firebolt without needing to see the note.

    The fall from the tower made my stomach turn over. Good catch, Severus!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I'm a psych major and we learned about this is psychology class, but then also becasue of various campus jobs I've held I was required to take 4 or 5 different suicide prevention seminars.  They really covered symptoms well so that we knew what to look out for in other people.  Giving away prized possessions, feeling relief once the choice of when and how to do it is made, etc.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry!!! Oh, I just want to hug him!!! I feel so, so bad for him!
Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 2:53 am
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWWWWWW that was such a cute ending to this chapter, cant wait for the next update... not that youve been making us, thanks!!!!
Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 2:02 am
Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! I love your story so far. Very well written and the emotions practically scream at you. My heart just hurts for Harry.
Title: Inside Out 04 Feb 2011 12:15 am
Reviewer: crayzgrl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is wonderful. ^.^ Keep it up.
Title: Inside Out 03 Feb 2011 8:57 pm
Reviewer: mnfm (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very good!
    I hope you give hell to Ron and Hermione for not trying hard enough.
Title: Inside Out 03 Feb 2011 8:25 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    well that was a very quick update and we got 2 chapters
    please update that quick again :D
Title: Inside Out 03 Feb 2011 8:08 pm
Reviewer: AshleyAnesthetic (Signed) [Report This]
    I was waiting for another chapter and you gave two!
    I can't wait to see what happens! Keep being awesome.

Title: Grasping at Straws 03 Feb 2011 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Mandoiria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is so amazing i canĀ“t wait for the next chapter. Thank you , your writing is sou marvelous. :D

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