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Title: Chapter 1 30 Dec 2021 3:34 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Is this a sequel? I feel like I'm missing something
Title: Chapter 4 15 Apr 2021 12:56 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story! And it prompted a nice reflection on the concept of Xanadu.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Apr 2014 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is a beautiful, incredibly written story. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Apr 2014 6:13 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!
Title: Chapter 4 28 May 2012 4:48 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    My my, what a lovely story. It was quite unique, and was wonderfully written. I loved the snowball fight between Harry and Draco. It was an amusing moment, that quite honestly reminded me a lot of my friends when I was twelve. Everyone got a face-wash at some point after the big blizzard in my grade seven year! Anyway, thank you for the lovely story.
Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 4:45 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh. That conversation between Severus and Charity Burbage was hilarious. You had Severus pegged perfectly. I loved when Harry wondered if Charity was suicidal, the way she was laughing at Snape's response.
Title: Chapter 2 28 May 2012 4:44 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sinistra. Her appearance is brief, but enough to give a nice snapshot of who she is. The descriptions of the scene in the astronomy tower are lovely. And I rather enjoyed the last line of this. It gave a nice picture.
Title: Chapter 1 28 May 2012 4:42 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's emotions are so powerful. You can really feel this intensity, and how his emotions are simply overflowing. It reminds me of being twelve! Well done.
Title: Chapter 4 20 Mar 2011 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    this was such a different and unique story...i loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks you! :D
Title: Chapter 4 10 Mar 2011 8:17 am
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So many oft-forgotten teachers in there. I loved the interactions between them and the boys, specially Professor Kettleburn's.
    I wanted to leave a review at the end of each chapter but was too carried away in the flow of the story.
    You are a great writer - I generally tend to skip over descriptions of scenery but you write them so beautifully with subtle imagery weaved into into it. Love the way you described Snape's Xanadu ... Wel, I am off to look for my own...

    Fantastic, as always!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Kettleburn is a favorite of mine as well. lol. I had a bit of fun with Snape's Xanadu and a bit of help!

    Thank you!


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