Reviews For Win The War: Consanguinity
I love your Sirius, it's so refreshing to see him cast firmly in Harry's corner.
Tobias - you have an alcoholic's priorities spot on, Harry really has the worst luck, doesn't he? I hope the man isn't so brain-damaged yet that he can't change his path.
Snape - I don't wonder that Harry can't trust the change in treatment, it's so stark, and I suspect that Severus' fear and relief at finding Harry safe will explode rather violently, having adverse effect on the progress they've made.
Theo and the muggle teenagers - I loved the interactions and building friendships.
Malfoy - you have me intrigued.
Eileen and the dept. of mysteries - after this ending I feel like I have an incessant itch I won't be able to scratch for a while.
Tommy is Theo's father, I suppose?
Can't wait for more [if it wasn't clear]
I have read this story like two or three times already but for the last chapters I’ll reread it!
You ask about what I would like to see in the next chapter? I would like to see Harry and Severus fight together to reveal what Eileen found out and to stop Voldemort from taking over Slytherin House. Perhaps if Draco and teddy could join them it would be an added bonus.
Thank you again for a wonderful story
Okay, WHY did Draco's mom leave him when Diagon Alley was being attacked?
And does Severus not know whether or not Harry is alive?? He's just going to find out when he arrives at Hogwarts???
And are they really starting school as normal after the tragic attack at Diagon Alley???? Did all the school kids survive????? Did they get all their supplies before everything was destroyed?????? What about those who lost loved ones in the attack??????
And what the heck about Harry and Snape's mom being murdered and the abuses in the Department of Mysteries???????
REALLY needing part 2! Looking forward to it. :)
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