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Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 22 May 2022 8:31 pm
Reviewer: dex (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm genuinely shocked Ghost didn't turn out to be a death eater whisking him away to Voldy! I was bracing myself lol! I love that twist. I'm so excited to read more of this. Your handling of just how badly every single adult in his life fumbled the situation from beginning to present is so satisfying! Hopefully Snape (and Sirius? I love your Sirius and hope things look up for him) can prove to be the exception to the rule for Harry.

    Theo becoming Harry's friend is so satisfying. I love stories that insert Draco into the equation, and having Theo is a very refreshing twist!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment <3 I'm enjoying your insight!
Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 22 May 2022 11:36 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Im really interested in this version of events!! Ive always wanted harry to tell them off, and he did. Ive been thinking sirius potions are suspicious and harry took the vials to check! Ive been hoping harry finds a way to do stuff without going theough dumbledore -- honestly the order does NOTHING at all and Harry is the most important part of what they think is their advantage yet none of them care nor even pretend to respect him-- and now Harry has some REAL help. So thanks! Awesome story

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your comment! And I agree completely!

    Also, Just to let you know, there is a new chapter:)

Title: Chapter 14: Plangentine 22 May 2022 10:18 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Honestly snape can back off. Does he seriously think he's done anything good just because he applogizes ONE time and does a few kind things? He did nothing but mock, humiliate, berate, degrade, belittle, and any other word you wanna toss in for 4 whole years. He exacerbated the abuse he was already suffering. And he thinks harry should be trusting him just cause he had a change of heart? Screw that, HARRY hasnt had a change. Hes still the boy snape detested and eagerly, viciously attacked daily. Ugh sorry for the rant. Just... freaking snape man. Honestly harry IS better with tobias than snape or the dursleys. The second severus decides harry reminds him too much of James, he'll forget all about being sad for the poor abused brother he never knew he had or wanted

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for reading and of course for your comment!!!

    You are, of course, right!Severus can't expect the trust from Harry so soon, and he can't blame him for thatXD 

Title: Chapter 12: Vernon 22 May 2022 6:17 am
Reviewer: Vivid Murk (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, the moment Snape realizes the enormity of his past mistakes - satisfying!
Title: Chapter 5: The Encounter 22 May 2022 6:16 am
Reviewer: Vivid Murk (Signed) [Report This]
    The way Harry lashes out at Severus here is so satisfying! Snape's affronted surprise that Harry would choose Tobias over him - "he's treated me a million times better than you ever have. So why would I go with someone who hates me?" It's saddening, that Harry would defend Tobias...but Snape needed to hear those words, I think!

    And Dumbledore's nonchalance when Snape confronts him is truly angering!
Title: Chapter 3: Oasis, Roo and Pele 22 May 2022 6:12 am
Reviewer: Vivid Murk (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Oasis
Title: Chapter 16: 12 Grimmauld Place 14 Mar 2022 5:42 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far. I’m looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 16: 12 Grimmauld Place 03 Feb 2022 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Roonil Wazlib (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter... Please write the next one soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your comment, they really make may day.

     

    I will try post ASAP, but unfortunately RL happens :/ (although I would prefer to write than do other thingsXD

Title: Chapter 16: 12 Grimmauld Place 03 Feb 2022 2:14 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I choose Snape’s perspective where Harry’s point was good, but the delivery made it dead on arrival.

    Author's Response: Thank you for comment. Yeah, Snape was kinda right :)
Title: Chapter 16: 12 Grimmauld Place 01 Feb 2022 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m afraid I’m never on Dumbledore’s side I can’t stand the way he treated Harry in the books. Thank you a good chapter

    Author's Response: Same with me, I don't understand, why some people gloryfy him. Thank you for the review<3

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