| Title: Chapter 10: Theodore
| 10 May 2021 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliff hanger! Severus will not be impressed!
Thank you a good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for the review :D
Nice chapter! I hope Severus doesn’t blame Harry for Nott’s drunken state (and really hope Tobias doesn’t find out about the party or tattoo). It was fun seeing Harry and Nott acting like typical teenagers.
Author's Response: Thank you for review :D<3
| Title: Chapter 9: Ingredients
| 06 May 2021 11:07 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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Oh. It is so nice of Snape, even though he is still quite mean. And I think that Harry really has an anxiety proble. Great chapter, more please!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviews! :D
| Title: Chapter 8: Twenty-eight pounds
| 06 May 2021 10:45 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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I pity Harry:( will somebody help him?
Author's Response: Somebody has to:)
| Title: Chapter 7: Porthcurno
| 06 May 2021 10:34 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 6: Sirius
| 06 May 2021 9:55 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 5: The Encounter
| 06 May 2021 9:36 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 4: Training
| 06 May 2021 9:11 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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Tobias really is a jerk. Poor Harry.
| Title: Chapter 3: Oasis, Roo and Pele
| 06 May 2021 8:58 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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Really nice chapter. I hope you won't make your OCs Mery Sue. So far they are ok.
| Title: Chapter 2: The Letters
| 06 May 2021 8:48 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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Is Tobias as bad as in Snape's memories? :(
Author's Response: Kind of, thanks for the review!
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