This is my first time on this website so idk if
there’s other reviews or I just can’t see them but
I rly like this fic the characters feel rly canon and
I like how you spaced the mini paragraphs as it’s
Easier to read. Kudos!! :)
I’m rly liking this story so far I feel like Harry is
Very in character
The tension leading up to this chapter was perfect, and made reading it very cathartic in a strange way. I like how, by having to polyjuice Harry, Snape had to actually think about his actions and gained some empathy/insight that way. The only thing that could make it better would be to actually see the result of Snape's hard-earned evidence gathering by either getting to see her hauled out of Hogwarts or by getting to see the trial. Thanks for the story, waitingondaisies!
How interesting and unique to have Severus pose as Harry through polyjuice to bring down Umbridge. I like how Severus and Harry now have similar scars, as such a physical sign of their bond in battle. I also like Severus’s reflections on how difficult it would have been for Harry to learn Occlumency by clearing his mind, while serving those awful detentions with Umbridge. The details in your writing of people’s thoughts and reactions really bring it to life. And great ending that leaves us seeing the story as a foundation for Harry and Severus working together towards the war ahead!
This is very good. I can't think of what to say because it is just about 2 am here, but i hope you will take the fact i stayed up late to read it as the complement it is.
I like the small but important, shared, detail of his heart aching and being soothed simultaneously by being tucked in. I like how this all makes it very easily to, literally, walk a mile in Harry's shoes. This is all very good.
Really enjoyed this! I’ve never read a fic with Snape pretending to be Harry, it worked really well with his seeing Harry differently! Thanks so much for writing!
Author's Response: i just thought, as you said, that having snape pretend to be harry would be a great way to force him to really See harry, you know!! and thank you for reading and especially for reviewing!!!
Really enjoyed this! I’ve never read a fic with Snape pretending to be Harry, it worked really well with his seeing Harry differently! Thanks so much for writing!
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