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Reviews For No Bed of Roses
Title: In a Fog 13 Jan 2025 7:46 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great line:
    “Wake up, Potter. You’re making my daughter cry.”
    Happy to see this being resumed!
Title: In a Fog 12 Jan 2025 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you for such a long and interesting chapter. Obviously the most important part was Harry awakening and mending although I'm very worried about his mental state as I think he has had to relieve his past injuries and abuse. Typical that the first thing he thinks about is Holly, so sweet.

    I like the Phillip character and found it interesting the connection between him and Sirius. The brothers getting along is really interesting. I hope Narsissa and Dudley sort themselves out soon.

    again thank you for continuing your wonderful story.

Title: In a Fog 11 Jan 2025 11:32 am
Reviewer: Iris (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!
Title: In a Fog 11 Jan 2025 3:07 am
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
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    Harry!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Title: Unchartered Waters 02 Jan 2025 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Great to have you and your wonderful story back. 

    Tobias and Minerva have said some necessary and hard things to Severus and Hermione, good for them. Severus is continuing to be blind to what Harry is he can't even see why he is in a coma for so long, someone should tell him a few home truths, Lucius tried but he doesn't know a lot, but of course Harry wants to keep his secrets. Thank you for updating

Title: Unchartered Waters 01 Jan 2025 4:55 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow. Welcome back and happy new year! Well wishes from the U.S. 😄

    • As per usual, I enjoy how the story shows snippets of people's points of view for different things. It's fascinating and keeps the story from feeling like the camera is super glued to one spot.
    • I'll admit, I'm glad Holly pointed out that her and Harry wouldn't mean much to Malfoy Sr if not for their roles/use in his life. I'm glad she's an observant character.
    • Another thing I liked was Snape's talk with his father. It's particularly poignant when it's coming from "the source" of his worst traits. Speaking of people's worst traits, I'm now kinda curious how Snape Sr would react to the Dursleys. I doubt it'd ever happen, but I doubt they'd get along. He'd probably clock them as just as horrible as he was.

Title: Tip of the Iceberg 10 Aug 2024 8:29 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, a few more surprises here! I love how you bring in new layers into the story all the time and the Smelting's headmaster being a squib is certainly a new one on me. The development of the characters is going on beautifully and Harry being out of it has allowed a lot of backstories to develop. 

    Thank you so much for continuing to update your excellent story.

Title: Tip of the Iceberg 08 Aug 2024 8:09 pm
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
    So good! But I can’t wait for harry to wake up!
Title: Swim Against the Tide 14 Jul 2024 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    A very reflective interesting chapter thank you. Interesting how you make Harry such an important central character for two chapters despite the fact that he has not been awake during them. It will be interesting to see his reaction to what has happened. 

Title: Swim Against the Tide 11 Jul 2024 9:30 pm
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
    So happy to get another chapter! I was just rereading that previous one today and then a notification for a new one! Yea!

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