Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Coming Back Home
Title: Snape's laboratory 19 Oct 2023 9:43 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]

    Nicely written progression from PTSD to beoming an apprentice. 



    Author's Response: Thank you! Weird progression if you think about it hahaha but I’m glad you liked it
Title: Getting closer 03 Oct 2023 4:59 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad Severus starts explaining himself more. And,hell, I think we all know how difficult that is for him.
    It's like a glance at how their relationship could have developed without the mutual hatte and with more explaing in both sides.
    Love the detail you go into with their feelings and emotional landscape.
    Wow, simply wow.😊

    Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely comment. I’m glad you are enjoying the story! I hope you like the next chapters too :)
Title: A crazy idea 03 Oct 2023 4:44 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! I love the way Harry's and Severus' relationship unfolds and how they both open up. Lovely idea with the pensieve, I'm curious what Severus will say.
Title: Waking up in Grimmauld Place 01 Oct 2023 4:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, I loved the interaction with Kreacher and his love of clothes!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, I’m glad you did!
Title: New beginnings 01 Oct 2023 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful conversation you are so good with getting the words and feelings so clear without seeming to have forced them thank you

    Author's Response: That’s such a compliment, thank you so much! :)
Title: A good day 31 Aug 2023 2:49 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, I liked this. The deep friendship between the three of them is warming me from inside out. And what I like just as much is that Ron had matured into this brilliant boy/ young man instead of being an immature prick like he ist some schön to be (or has been at times in the books).
    Thank you for this chapter!
    Take care and stay well.

    Author's Response: Thank you, you too :) And yes I really like Ron and his evolution, as well as the trio friendship. I hate when in fanfics they don’t give them the importance that they have. They are literally willing to die for each other ffs! Anyway, thank you for another comment!
Title: New beginnings 30 Aug 2023 4:03 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you'll be writing more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Me too :)
Title: New beginnings 30 Aug 2023 3:43 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you! I'm so glad you'll post more,cbur I agree this was a very good resolution so far

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) now I only hope I don’t mess up that nice “ending” with the next chapters 😅
Title: Waking up 29 Aug 2023 2:14 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked that mix of their old roles and their new found standing showing through during their first conversation. And I also grew all warm inside when Harry thought about the feeling of safety Ron's and Hermione's presence is giving him.
    Lovely chapter and, of course: Yay!!!! Severus woke up!!!😀

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the comments you’ve been leaving on the story, I really appreciate them! And I’m glad you liked their first conversation and the trio scenes :)
Title: At the infirmary 27 Aug 2023 8:06 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, this was a heart-warming chapter in so many accounts. I loved the support between our trio and Ginny and I am so glad for the fact that both Poppy and Minerva have affectionate feelings for Severus.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to show that people care for Snape even if he tries so hard to push people away :’)

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