You’ve captured the feelings of recovery from loss so nicely. I can feel the trio’s melancholy, as well as their desire to find light in their lives again. I’m looking forward to more conversations between Harry and Snape ahead.
That first conversation felt so true to the circumstances. It was really well done.
Beautiful chapter. I like how you’ve captured the general state of exhaustion everyone is in, and the complexity of everyone’s feelings.
I’m playing catch-up on this story, and really enjoyed the opening chapter.
| Title: A comforting presence
| 06 Jan 2022 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. I love how Severus managed to get Harry to talk by using his Patronus very ingenious
Author's Response: Thank you for another comment, I'm happy you think so :) The way Harry describes Snape's patronus in the books always gets me emotional... And I figured he could use that feeling of safety and comfort to talk about hard stuff. Good to know that you liked it :D
Really good chapter,and its hard to believe that English is not your first language. You have a talent for making your characters come alive, and I love how you are writing Ron -its refreshing to read something that allows his good points to come to the fore.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your words, they mean a lot to me. I have been trying to show Ron how I think he would be by the end of the books: mature and traumatized by the war, but also keeping that sense of humor and loyalty that we all know and love. I hate when people write him as this one-dimensional character that is only there for comedic relief and has no sensitivity whatsoever. It's non believable and an insult to the character, tbh...
Anyway, thank you again for the comment and have a nice day! :)
Another enjoyable chapter. Thank you for the quotation mark change. It made your story much easier to follow for me.
Author's Response: That's great to read! I'm glad it's better for you this way! :D
| Title: Getting closer
| 28 Oct 2021 10:28 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much I found this chapter so much easier to read and enjoy.
Author's Response: You are welcome! I'm happy for that :)
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OMG No me puedo creer que se corte aquí el capítulo! Qué interesante, sigue pronto, porfa!
Author's Response: ¡Hola! Me alegro que te haya gustado :) Intentaré escribir lo más rápido posible pero quizás tarde un poco porque me acabo de mudar y todavía necesito acabar de instalarme... Pero en cuanto pueda me pondré a escribir. ¡Prometido!
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