| Title: You've Been Hurt Before (i can see it in your eyes)
| 13 Jan 2023 11:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, a very realistic conversation between the two and Severus being helpful in his own way
| Title: You've Been Hurt Before (i can see it in your eyes)
| 12 Jan 2023 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Nicely written conversation between Harry and Severus in the potions lab, though I hope Snape let someone at Grimmald Place know where Harry is.
| Title: You've Been Hurt Before (i can see it in your eyes)
| 11 Jan 2023 11:59 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I loved this chapter! The dialogue felt crisp and in-character - beautifully done. Thanks for the really enjoyable read.
Nice way to have Severus become Harry's guardian.
Oh, my.
That was brilliantly done.
Thanks for this intense and well-written chapter. It was funny, eventful, and horrifying - in short, a thrilling ride. Thanks so much, and I’m looking forward to reading on.
| Title: Just Another Manic Monday
| 04 Jan 2023 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a brilliant combination of humour and horror
Very much looking forward to more.
Oh, my.
What an exciting start.
This is going in a really interesting direction, I'm so excited to find out what happens to Dudley!
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