| Title: CH 21: Memento Vivere
| 17 Feb 2023 5:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting conversations, which you do brilliantly, I feel that this is an important chapter giving us information and moving the plot along, thank you
Author's Response: That's really kind of you to say!
Very good!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: CH 20: Seeking Sanctuary
| 17 Feb 2023 5:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. The dynamics of the group are fascinating .
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Great after battle reactions.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Nicely written battle.
Author's Response: Thank you! Action scenes are fun.
| Title: CH 19: Reaching Out
| 17 Feb 2023 4:49 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You describe the horrors that are haunting Harry so well thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Whoo hoo! This is great!
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it =)
| Title: CH 18: The Dark of Night
| 17 Feb 2023 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear poor Severus is not only dying but trying to deal with two traumatised boys, you do give him a lot of trouble. Thank you an excellent chapter
Author's Response: There are so many lessons yet to learn, and this is biggest one yet <3
| Title: CH 17: Falling Skies
| 16 Feb 2023 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, I can see why Severus is doing this but it is so hard on Harry. Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Things are getting far more challenging!
| Title: CH 16: A Call to Arms
| 16 Feb 2023 9:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good description of the Griffindors in action. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
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