| Title: CH 15: The Way Forward
| 16 Feb 2023 4:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely healing chapter thank you
Author's Response: You are very welcome <3
| Title: CH 14: Into the Depths
| 16 Feb 2023 4:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like a Severus POV chapter as it brings a good balance to the story. Interesting that Narcissa was wearing muggle dress I would think she would always be in robes. Thank you this story is so gripping
Author's Response: I loooove Severus POVs! There is always that honest, brutal truth to them and a darkness that a Harry POV doesn't quite have. You'll definitely get more Severus-chapters this story.
| Title: CH 13: Fade In
| 16 Feb 2023 5:40 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great fun for most of the chapter thank you. Hermione is lovely and so patient.
Author's Response: She really is <3
| Title: CH 12: With Asphodel
| 16 Feb 2023 4:47 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a wonderful finding in the library thank you
Author's Response: I've always wanted to add it in, and since Severus has difficultly admitting anything of the sort, giving Harry the breadcrumb to find it, is more his style.
| Title: CH 11: Rise Up
| 16 Feb 2023 4:29 am
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Loved the old D.A. meeting but so sad, thank you
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew it was going to be a very sad and solemn one.
| Title: CH 10: Back Within the Shadows
| 16 Feb 2023 4:09 am
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Interesting insight into Malfoy manor thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: CH 9: Into the Forest Again
| 16 Feb 2023 3:51 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I loved the two Patronus working together thank you
Author's Response: If only it happened in canon
| Title: CH 8: The Slow Ascent
| 16 Feb 2023 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
| Title: CH 7: Lament
| 16 Feb 2023 3:20 am
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I think you are saying that Harry has PTSD, not surprising after the events of the year. Thank you for writing such a sensitive chapter
Author's Response: Thank you <3 mental health is a big theme in this story.
| Title: CH 6: A New Problem
| 16 Feb 2023 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the interaction between Severus and Minerva you are so good at dialogue, thank you
Author's Response: Dialogue is my favorite things to write! I've gotten a lot better with it now in more recent works.
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