I like the way in which you’ve characterized the routine of Harry’s summer at Privet Drive. Thanks for your story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! And sorry about deleting your other review. This site drives me absolutely bonkers. Your reviews always make my day! :)
Fun start to your story! Harry seems thoroughly fed up. I wonder if he’ll reach his breaking point soon. Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you! You may have to be patient with me until that happens. There'll be some stuff to cover before that :)
| Title: Prologue
| 30 Mar 2023 5:41 am
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| Reviewer: Mau (Signed)
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Muy buen comienzo
Author's Response: Gracias :)
| Title: Day off
| 29 Mar 2023 9:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting and I love Ben already. I like to think of Severus by the sea, a lovely thought.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
| Title: Welcome Home Mr. Snape
| 29 Mar 2023 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I liked their dialogue. A 16 year old would be short and to the point and Severus is not one for chit chat. Thank you this story is becoming very intriguing
| Title: Survival Training
| 29 Mar 2023 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love this story but would like some conversation and interaction as well.
Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I like reading your thoughts about the story. Yes, I hope there'll be some interaction and conversations soon. It's hard writing conversations for characters who aren't really keen on having them :D
| Title: Loopy loop of Summer
| 29 Mar 2023 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Prologue
| 29 Mar 2023 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great scene painted here. I liked Harry’s thought interspersed with comments from the Dursleys
I love how you writte, pls continue son, I want to know what happend next!
Author's Response: Thank you!This means a lot to me :) I don't know when I'll be able to update, but I have some ideas for the next chapter. If only it would write itself :D
Nice
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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