Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 11 19 Feb 2024 12:36 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a terrific chapter. I love how Severus is now publicly in Harry’s corner and has made him promises that I hope he intends to keep.
Title: Chapter 10 04 Feb 2024 6:05 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That chapter end was tantalizing! How could Severus not have noticed the necklace or felt its connection to his Mark? I hope he tells Snape soon!
Title: Chapter 9 23 Jan 2024 5:27 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dunh! Things just got real for Harry. Thanks for updating your story. I enjoyed the pace of the chapter.
Title: Chapter 8 11 Jan 2024 12:01 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, what a vision. I like how you’ve captured Draco’s emotions. I like how the rest of the Weasleys are being normal and supportive, especially Fred and George.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Jan 2024 1:26 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Hermione’s betrayal stings, but the scene with Snape was wonderfully angsty and tender. Thanks for updating!
Title: Chapter 6 01 Jan 2024 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you for replying to me and of course I accept it is your universe and you can do whatever you want in your stories. I feel bad about dismissing Hermione as she never let Harry down in cannon and was always with him.

    This chapter is very well done and I like the idea of extra courses thank you 

Title: Chapter 6 27 Dec 2023 5:13 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron is the worst. I can’t believe Mrs. Weasley didn’t make him apologize or set him straight! I like that he’s relying on Snape more. Thanks for updating!
Title: Chapter 5 21 Dec 2023 10:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh dear you don't like Harry to have his friends. I can understand it as a plot device but Harry needs his friends and although it's good that he turns to Severus he also needs Ron and Hermione. This is just my opinion and I don't mind for one story but it is every story.

     Having said that this is a brilliant story and I love it



    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story regardless and I respect your opinion, but Harry will still have friends and does always have other friends in my stories. I don't do this because I don't like to Harry to have his friends; I just prefer to explore other characters and the relationships Harry can have with them instead. Ron and Hermione don't have to be the only people he's ever friends with. He should have been closer to others in canon, in my opinion. In this one, as I've said, he's going to become good friends with Draco and Luna instead. Fanfiction is typically AU in some respect for a reason. I'm not the only one to frequently exchange Ron and Hermione for other characters. Ron and Hermione aren't the only other characters that exist that can be Harry's friends. Sorry. *shrugs*

Title: Chapter 5 19 Dec 2023 9:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so glad that everyone heard Ron’s diatribe - he can’t hide from his words now.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Dec 2023 3:08 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that RONALD WEASLEY! shriek will be reverberating through my head for the rest of the day.
    Good stuff.

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