WOAH. This was so intense, so good. Poor Harry, he really is a mess. He really needs help. I'm surprised his friends haven't stolen a sleeping draught from the infirmary for him. I hope Hermione forces him to go to see Madame Pomfrey. He's a wreck and everyone can see it.

What a fantastic writing style and description. I could literally feel what he was feeling. My stomach is in knots just like Harry. 

Will Snape be cruel? Will he help? I can't wait to find out.

Fantastic start. Thanks for much for wiriting and sharing it.