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Reviews For Bright Eyes
Nice description of Snape's fear as he unsuccessfully battles it.
Oh wow, everything is happening fast in this chapter. It's so wild to hear Snape saying something good to Harry - that Harry is brave for not running away from his fears, that he's not a monster if he takes Wolfsbane. It's nice to hear it, especially from Snape 😭d84;a039;. Thanks for the chapter! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Snape's attempt at easing Harry's mind. So glad you are enjoying this story so far, I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Oh poor Harry. Everything is so overwhelming... That's so wild to see Harry so emotionally unstable though. Yes, the full moon is approaching but still. Ah if only he just trusted the adults around to help him. But alas the Dursleys destroyed his trust in adults. Thanks for the chapter <3 Author's Response: Exactly, if only he had someone he could trust . . . Thanks so much for reading, it is much appreciated. Enjoy the next chapter!
This won't go well at all. Author's Response: No it will not! Thanks for reading, enjoy the next chapter!
Nice description of Harry's desperation. Dumbledore should have told the professors earlier than Harry had the cloak. Author's Response: Yes, Dumbledore should have revealed that peace of information. Thanks so much for reading, it is so appreciated and keep me writing! Enjoy the next chapter!
I finally registered on the site just to track this story! It's great so far! I hope the new DADA professor is interesting and ends up being good. Author's Response: Wow, so glad my story had you joining the site! So glad you are enjoying it, I have so much fun writing this one, its a new take for me. Enjoy the next chapter!
I like how abused students have been identified so they can be helped. Remus' reaction was well written. Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you are enjoying the story, and that you liked Remus's reaction. I tried to keep it realistic for his character. Enjoy the next chapter!
I like how abused students have been identified so they can be helped. Remus' reaction was well written.
Idk about this new DADA professor. Maybe I'm being paranoid but you can never underestimate Dumbledore's ability of hiring dubious teachers. I hope it's not the case but who knows.. Thanks for the chapter! <3 Author's Response: The DADA professors have always been shady. We'll have to wait and see about this new one. Thanks for reading, it is so appreciated. Enjoy the next chapter! |
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