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Title: Chapter 4.5: Memories 26 Aug 2024 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow that was a cliffie!

    This makes it awkward, what a mess. Severus thinks Dumbledore has given him the memories, Harry knows Severus has seen them and doesn't care and is passed out somewhere!

    Thank you so much and I can't wait for the next chapter

Title: Chapter 4: Memories 26 Aug 2024 2:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Such emotion in this chapter thank you. I think you were spot on with Severus's reaction to the memories, he couldn't just change overnight from one set of feelings to another and he of course willblame Harr for that. A shame he doesn't believe Dumbledore that Voldemort is avoiding being in Harry's head, but understandable.

    im a bit confused, was Dumbledore part of the plot or not?

Title: Chapter 4.5: Memories 25 Aug 2024 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! I was excited to see a part 2 to chapter 4; but my what an angsty one! The difference in events will be Interesting to see played out. But poor Harry! Left all alone, hurting, in the corridor... :'(
Title: Chapter 4.5: Memories 25 Aug 2024 8:30 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    That was so sad - Snape starts to be himself,  Harry has to die... Great chapters!! Thanks for sharing your ideas.

Title: Chapter 3: The Truth 20 Aug 2024 2:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Great chapter with a lot of answers but more questions, thank you

Title: Chapter 3: The Truth 19 Aug 2024 8:03 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Sigh... This is one of those stories you wish you were reading AFTER it was all written, so you could binge it...
Title: Chapter 3: The Truth 19 Aug 2024 8:00 am
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    Another great chapter. I love how you describe Harry's conflict between nasty potion master vs a dad he wanted his whole life.

Title: Chapter 3: The Truth 19 Aug 2024 7:19 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    When Harry got detention for being assaulted by Drago, I wondered if Snape was getting revenge for Dumbledore making him swear not to tell about the Marauders’ werewolf trap. Enjoyable chapter.
Title: Chapter 2: Back to Hogwarts 12 Aug 2024 7:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Excellent chapter thank you

Title: Chapter 2: Back to Hogwarts 12 Aug 2024 6:48 am
Reviewer: Jasmine Moon (Signed) [Report This]

    Great start to the story, I cant wait to see how this plays out. Keep on working on it!!!!!!


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