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Reviews For The Learning Curve
Fantastic chapter, lovely to be back in the village again though not in these circumstances
Thank you a brilliant chapter
Thanks for the chapter! Interesting to see that Harry's fate is on hold while the break goes on- maybe to give Umbridge time to recover. What's Callum doing there? Hell of a way to come from Scotland, and he can't have known Snape would even be there- Harry said to them it was Petunias house. I’m excited for the next part.
Oh dear, I wish Harry had seen the paper Umbridge had with his name on it, this means trouble
Just picturing the scene, and you painted it very well, made me laugh, thank you
A nice comfortable chapter with the interactions being more like the previous installmwnt at the village. Nice to see them comfortable together, stufying
I like the description of Harry finding a path to categorise his two Snapes. It sets up the difficulties Harry has with the two over the next chapters
I really like this chapter- the interface between professor snape and severus is a really interesting dynamic- and particularly when Dumbledore is there too.
I wonder why Dawlish was like that at the start of the chapter- if he was just witing to get enough evidence against Harry before playing his cards or if there is something else at play like an imperius or other outside control and he didn’t have instructions for that. Really enjoyed the chapter, I was so happy when I saw there was an update!
I'm reall6 enjoing this story, and loved the previous part as well. I’ve just got my login working again so I’m back to leave reviews. I enjoyed Snape's not a date in this chapter, and it was interesting to put in that she thought she was giving information to the order, but was feeding it to the wrong side- it really emphasises that there are three sides to the whole conflict |
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