Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 13 Dec 2024 4:30 am
Reviewer: Wejee (Signed) [Report This]

    Super intriguinged... looking forward to see where you'll be taking this!

     

    I have one small thing to note.. the chapter has some repetitive paragraphs as if you have drafted the first pragragh then finalized it in next.

    but otherwise I like it very well ,keep up the good work



    Author's Response: Ah drat! Thank you for catching that. Late night editing and forgetting to remove things. oops! Fixing them now :)
Title: Chapter 1 12 Dec 2024 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!

    And I love the length, too. Feel free to always get "carried away." :)
Title: Chapter 1 12 Dec 2024 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Crevette (Signed) [Report This]
    PROFESSOR SNAPE!? :O (I kinda expected this, but still...)

    That cliffhanger though....can't wait to see where you'll take this story :)

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