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Reviews by Ms_Prongs
When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.
Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story. Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH. Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007 Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Anyways...When it comes to reviews I'm about as articulate as our dear Harry trying to apologize to Severus. So... I guess I'll say this - I'm in absolute love with this story, the pace and tone of the story are both perfect. I love your characterization of Severus, and I absolutely love how you're painting Harry. He's an awkward teenager put in to an awful circumstance that no one should deal with, but he's still human. He's not perfect, and he's going to make glaring mistakes and be a total prat sometimes. But you make him learn from it. And things aren't instantly better either. No. He has to work for it. As well he should. I do hope he is able to "Trust" Severus in the way that he needs to though. I really want that, badly. I know I'll have to, but I can't wait to see what you do with this and where you take it. Author's Response: Ha - I'm sorry I made you growl, but your growl made me laugh. :) I'm so so glad that you are enjoying the story! Hearing what you liked was music to my ears. I really want Snape and Harry to trust each other too. Writing is funny sometimes - you think you're in charge of where the characters go, but then you sit down to write a scene and they drag their feet say, "no, writer! Not that way! This way instead!" And I'm a pushover, so I follow down the path they lead me to, and sometimes it winds up in the delete pile, but often it turns out that they knew better than I did what they needed to do all along. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Merry Christmas! Author's Response: Aw I'm so happy that you're that excited by the updates! It makes my little heart happy too. :) I hope you had a Merry Christmas as well!!
I...I wasn't ready for this level of angst and drama so early in the morning. Yet another amazing chapter, and I cannot wait until the next one arrives! Author's Response: Don't screech! I don't want your boss to be mad at me! lol. I'm glad you liked it, angst/drama and all! Thank you for the review! :)
You have a way with words that just draws a person in. I couldn't help but cringe at each painful moment for him. GOD you're good. I really do need to go back and re-read this, it's been a while since I have... maybe that'll keep busy until your next update. Author's Response: I love thinking of it as an episode! :) I wanted to do regular updates (or at least let people know exactly when to expect an update) for the reason that it's more fun to follow a story that way. Plus it motivates me when I have a firm deadline and people holding me to it! Thank you for the compliment, and at the same time, I'm sorry the painful moments made you cringe! :) I'm so happy you're enjoying it so much, even enough to re-read it!! :) :) -- Sequel to Shadowland -- When the world of light has come to pass, and darkness comes to reign, bonds of blood can surpass, and a world of hate be tamed. When times are dark and enemies find they have common ground to stand on, unbreakable bonds can sometimes be forged. Can these bonds hold strong long enough to defeat darkness and once again bring the world into light? Betrayal can be a tricky thing...
Takes Place: 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Sep 2009 / 16 Sep 2009 Series: Blood Bond - Challenges: None
I feel like my heart has been ripped out of my chest, and my throat is on fire because I've been crying. I should be working damnit! I haven't worked all day, I've read this story! And now I can't stop crying. It's the sign of an amazing writer that can draw these emotions out of a reader. So while right now I'm quite displeased and I will be crying for a while... thank you for another amazing story. Severitus-beginning between years four and five. Harry is overcome with guilt over the death of Cedric Diggory and has isolated himsef from those who care. A strange gift arrives on his fifteenth birthday that changes everything.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 37 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Oct 2020 / 06 Jun 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
I'll probably try to go back and review as many chapters as possible, only because I honestly found this story first on Fanfiction dot net before I even knew Potions & Snitches was a thing! So I read it there first, then it stopped being updated and I got sad.. But I kept coming back to read and re-read because well... it was an amazing story and I loved where it was going, and I guess I could day dream a bit about the plot myself? I'm so excited that you're back and updating again and I CANNOT WAIT for the next chapters! Sirius does something to Harry that he shouldnt and he shatters the poor boy's last hope of finally having a family. He's lost and hurt and terrfied with no one to turn to. No one but the man who has made his life miserable anyway he could. How can Snape help Harry,when he hates him himself; or does he?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Profanity
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Nov 2020 / 18 Nov 2011 Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
I'm both saddened and relieved that Sirius is taking off on his own journey, and I do hope we get to see a little bit of it at least. I just hope when the time comes to be reunited, he doesn't try to take Harry back completely, but instead welcome the relationship Severus and Harry have, and try to integrate himself back in to it. Much love, and I can't wait for a new chapter! One unlucky hit with a strange spell. That's all it took to alter the course of Harry's life - and everyone else's life around him. Bound to stay within ten feet of each other, Harry Potter and Severus Snape have to learn to get along or die trying.
But sometimes in the hardest of times, one can learn things never imagined possible. After all, the past doesn't define the future. Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Mar 2020 / 11 Jan 2014 Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, Harry's Rant, Joined at the Hip, Secrets
Seriously though, holy crap mate. This is amazing, I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
What a fantastic chapter, GREAT reactions from all around - I just wish Sirius weren't such a total child sometimes. I cannot WAIT to see how the next chapter turns out! |
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