I really like the way that you’ve portrayed Harry’s deaged state. Your description of his clothing was hilarious. I enjoyed seeing a sliver of humanity shine through Snape for a fleeting moment at the end there.
Awwww, poor Harry. I hope Snape is starting to soften towards him. I bet Dumbledore's plan is to deage Harry every holiday and have him act as Snape's son. Of course, neither of them are aware of that. Tehe!
Great descriptions of all the emotions Harry is going through - very well done. I am enjoying this story immensely! Thanks for writing and sharing!
I can definately see snape taking on a strict father roll with Henrik. Harry is in for quite a ride. Keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 02 Oct 2018 12:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Why can't the adults see that keeping information from Harry only causes problems. Love the story especially the description of Harry's outfit!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was giggling to myself when I wrote that, especially Harry's imaginings of Voldemort laughing himself to death at Harry's appearance.
Snape doesn't know anything about kids if he expects Henrik to speak only when spoken to and all this other crap. I look forward to potion taking a firmer hold on Harry, for him becoming truly child-like with crying, tantrums and the abuse showing it's ugly teeth.
Author's Response: Ha! Snape always has unrealistic expectations of poor Harry. The potion will definitely have some interesting (and unexpected) effects on Harry! He will still mostly retain his teenager demeanour and personality, otherwise he will behave too far out of character and it's important that Harry is still himself as the relationship develops between him and Snape. That's not to say that there won't be tears, tantrums and trouble.
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