Thanks for another excellent chapter. Your characters feel so alive. Harry’s playing a difficult part in all this.
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update. I keep checking back everyday to see if you have updated :)
Author's Response: Hopefully I will have made you happy when next you check! :-)
severus figure out harry is eardropping... harry pick a to good of a hiding place!!
| Title: Chapter 7
| 20 Oct 2018 1:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a long and detailed chapter. I love the interaction between Severus and Harry it is very naturalistic and shows their characters. Poor Harry he is in an impossible position and I imagine that being in a cupboard will make it worse bringing back his cupboard.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review. :-) That Severus Snape is a slippery one to write. I want to show a softer side of him, but keep him believably close to canon Snape in his personality. It's quite fun to bounce Harry and Snape off one another to keep that snarkiness going. Things are going to get worse for Harry before they get better. Luckily he won't spend too long in the cupboard!
| Title: Chapter 7
| 20 Oct 2018 7:52 am
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Lovely chapter. The ending reminded me of Narnia to the point where I thought Harry was going to end up there, seen that movie way too many times. Can't wait too see who finds him and what happens next
Author's Response: Mmm...I do love The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe! Sadly, Harry is not destined to meet Mr Tumnus anytime soon. He is going to go on a bit of an adventure, though...eventually...as I make my way through this plot arc!
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