Oh my, the plot thickens! This is a fantastic story - touching, well-written, intriguing, and action-packed.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 06 Mar 2019 3:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow great ending. I really felt for Harry he was obviously wanting reassurance and a statement of concern about him from Severus in this scene and he did not get it, poor boy you tugged at my heartstrings and that is great writing thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I really feel for poor old Snape sometimes. He just doesn't know how to relate to people on an emotional level - especially Harry. The two of them have a lot of history to overcome before they can move forward, although both of them are starting to see that there is more that what sits at the surface!
who would be that sneaky to play with severus's memory!! hope the pink witch fail in her task at social worker's office!
Author's Response: Who indeed? And Umbridge isn't finished with Harry just yet!
Oh boy.... or is time rewriting itself?
Author's Response: Hmm...you will have to wait and see! I don't want to give away plot at this point :-)
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