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Title: Breakdown 06 Aug 2007 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Pyro (Signed) [Report This]
    Not Bad
Title: Breakdown 05 Aug 2007 12:31 am
Reviewer: ailishmckechnie (Signed) [Report This]
    Just a question. I have read this story amoung many others, and i cannot remember what story I read that has harry singing rage against the machine. is this one it?
Title: Breakdown 29 Jul 2007 6:08 pm
Reviewer: JM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought this was a great story - and I'm going to wait for the update! I specially loved the novel ideas - the 'magic taking' and the Weasley punishment. I don't get how long Harry had empathy for though? It was really encouraging to see Jars of Clay and Switchfoot quoted! (:
Title: Breakdown 01 Jul 2007 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Shadow Lighthawk (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read this before; I'm not quite sure if Chapter 12 was up then or not. Frankly, I don't know *why* I read this again. It's horrible - I seem to cry at least once a chapter, the actions of the adults make me want to scream and rage and beat something bloody, and I *can't* *stop* *reading*. It rips me up inside, but I can't help myself.

    It makes me so *angry* on Harry's behalf. They decide what's best for him without involving him at all, they drug him, they coerce him into telling the truth. They never seem to learn from their mistakes! The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over again and expecting a different result. It makes me hate them all so very much, and I *ache* for Harry, who gets shattered again and again.

    Honestly, at this point, I think Harry would be justified in telling them to fuck off and taking a vow of silence. Or this would be a great time for an insertion of the inheritance cliche, and Harry could vanish to a Fidelius-charmed manor and any further encounters with those hypocritical assholes could be on his terms. Pipe dream, I know, but I wish he had an escape hatch.

    Honestly, every adult in his life has lost his trust through his or her own act of idiocy, and I'm angry enough that I hope they never get it back. I'm not a forgiving person, especially when it comes to Harry.

    At this point, July 1 2007, I'm not sure if the story will ever be updated again - after two years, I'd pretty much call a story abandoned - but I hope you do update. I'm sure I would have to break out the tissues - again - but it's a compelling story that I don't think you're even a quarter of the way through.

    Good luck and good writing!
Title: Breakdown 20 May 2007 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE CONTINUE! I've been reading this fic here and on FF.net and I REALLY want to know what happens! And not just that but I REALLY REALLY want to know why its on Potions and Snitches when Snape isn't even really in the fic... it makes me curious!! I want to know whats going on!
Title: Breakdown 05 Jan 2007 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide Chequ (Anonymous) [Report This]

    More, more!! It is to great to be left for long...Absolutely fantastic. I love Gordon!! He is a great character! =). And your characterization of the rest of our much loved HP people is just fantastic. Your tonks is amazing as is Harry. Very believable and ...just GREAT writing! 

    Post more soon. =). Thanks for sharing your story. 

Title: Breakdown 28 May 2006 9:37 am
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh, love this story.  I'm just reading it again and hoping for an update!
Title: Breakdown 19 May 2006 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Ellie (Signed) [Report This]
    I truly can say that's my favourite story at the moment. It's great! G R E A T ! ! !   I like it very very much. But I wonder when we'll see Snape. I love him. And I really want him understand Harry. I hope that'll happen.
Title: Breakdown 13 May 2006 5:24 am
Reviewer: watcher (Anonymous) [Report This]
    KEEP IT UP.
    THIS STORY IS REAL GOOD>
    UPDATE REALL SOON!!!
Title: Breakdown 03 May 2006 1:51 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    I really would like to see this continued . . .

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