fantastic. this story is absolutely fantastic. i love it! its one of the best ive ever read. please PLEASE update soon!!
| Title: Breakdown
| 26 Mar 2005 4:51 pm
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| Reviewer: EJC (Anonymous)
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this is really good. I wish the adults would start understanding harry...
Keep up the good work.
| Title: Breakdown
| 25 Mar 2005 9:26 am
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| Reviewer: Amaris (Anonymous)
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I love it! Harry is a nice blend of insecurity and confidence; of fear and recklessness. Update soon!
| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Mar 2005 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: Meggplant (Anonymous)
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OHMYGOD! you updated! you have made me deliriously happy - i've been waiting for a new chapter for soooooo long! and we finally, FINALLY, are seeing someone get to the bottom of the trauma in Harry's life. finally, someone has seen the abuse inflicted on him by that Woman. finally, someone is hearing Harry talk about his experiences at the Dursley's. and hopefully the comments that have been made about him being so thin will also be addressed. i can't wait for the next chapter, in which i hope you will continue to illuminate for the other 'adults' in the house exactly what they have done by inflicting these situations on the poor boy. i just want to gather him into a hug, take him away from everyone except Gordon, and make sure they all know how much they have failed him as his guardians and caregivers. god. it really is interesting when you think about how many issues the canon Harry Potter must have. i hope JKR allows him to let loose some of his emotions in the next few books... it would not be good to have the same Harry who was so angry in the fifth book be the one who vanquishes the Dark Lord. frankly i could see him becoming a threat himself, given that his treatment has been so poor...
gah. i'm rambling. thank you so much for the story, i love it! i can't wait for more, and i hope you're still writing your other ones too...
xoxox
| Title: Breakdown
| 20 Mar 2005 10:25 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Rosebit (Anonymous)
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Yeah! you finally updated! now update again!
Author's Response: Don't I wish. Unfortunately, this is not my job, and the work I'm getting paid for gets priority. Trust me, though, if I could write Lies as part of my job, that would be great! ;-)
| Title: Breakdown
| 04 Mar 2005 1:15 am
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| Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous)
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Awsome! I love how you write the scenes between Harry and Gordon. I can't wait to read more!
| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Feb 2005 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Chimes Fergusson (Anonymous)
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Hey, I love your story! I was just wondering (and I dont know if you've already mentioned this) but when is Snape going to enter the story again?
Author's Response: He's on his way back in, imminently. Never fear, he is an important character in the fic. ;-)
| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Feb 2005 12:17 am
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| Reviewer: Asitha (Anonymous)
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When I first started reading this story I didn't think that I would like it. I thought that it would be overly dramatic and just plain stupid, but as I read I found myself failing to be able to walk away from it. I'm quite curious as to when there will be more Severus/Harry interaction. Please continue soon!
Hi!!!... Wow, it has been a lot since the last time you update. I was starting to think you have abandon the fic, so I was really happy when I found an autor alert in my mail telling me you had post a new chapter.
What can I said about it. It was really good. A pity snape wasn't in it. I was wondering, when will snape and harry know about their relationship. or at least when will they talk! or shout!... anything to show they know the other is alive.
Maybe when severus start to talk to harry suddenly all his problems will go away. (I know that's supid, in fact, it won't be very like harry that)...
Anyway, I hope you update sooner than the last time, and to see some interaction between you know who in the next chaper, or the chapter after that.
Well that's all, bye
Connie Eressëa
Miembro de la orden Sirusiana
Miembro de la orden Severusiana
Miembro de la orden Draconiana
| Title: Breakdown
| 21 Feb 2005 2:09 am
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| Reviewer: Gray Darken (Anonymous)
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Wow. That last chapter was very... emotional. It had been obvious that Harry would break down, but I had not realized how intense you would write it... But it was absolutly amazing how you did. It makes my heart ache, knowing that this happened to him... Thank you for writing this... I shall be looking for more soon. ^o^
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