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Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 03 Aug 2009 11:46 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    “You are hunt,” it was not a question. “Let me see.”

    Snape’s voice brooked no arguments, and Harry found himself taking off his shit to show his professor"

    You've got a couple of rather disastrous typos there...

    I think Severus behaved stupidly to Vernon. It's always a good idea to antagonize someone idly, right?

    And because I almost never see it done correctly: it's Dursleys, not Dursley's. It is not a possessive.

    Author's Response: Opps! Sorry about that! I'll fix it! Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 03 Aug 2009 11:15 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL!!! Nice one!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you much!

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