I love the way you’ve captured the tension between Severus and Harry, it makes sense that with Harry’s older age there would be more challenges in bonding. Thanks for the wonderfully long and full chapter.
Aw, how sweet. ^^ Ginny's really cool. *grin*
Good chapter!
Ooh, I guess I did read this, but I don't remember the last chapter. Oh well, the story is so good, that I don't mind reading it again! :)
Happy Thanksgiving although I am rather late but please don't bring it into a Harry Potter story there is no way they would celebrate the holiday they are in Scotland!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Again, the Thanksgiving thing is explained in the next chapter. They are celebrating it for somebody's benefit.
ummm we dont have thanksgiving in england.... whatever i love this story, the awkwardness between harry and severus is perfect. I cant wait to see how this progresses!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know about the Thanksgiving thing. It's explained in the next chapter though why they celebrated it this year.
Aw!!! I loved this whole chappie, but especially the ending. I love Ginny and Harry together.
You write the rocky relationship between Snape and Harry very well. It's harder at this age for them to understand and become closer.
I can't wait for the next chappie.
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| Reviewer: nightwisp (Anonymous)
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Good chapter, but you do know that there is no such thing as thanksgiving in great britan?
But they're in England! We don't have Thanksgiving in England.
Author's Response: I know, and for this I'm going to pull something out of thin air and say: There's an exchange student from America there in Ravenclaw this year and they're celebrating it for him.
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