I love how you’ve captured the anxiety and concern Severus is feeling about his newfound son. Thanks for the great story.
Well worth the wait--and you left us with Harry, once again, in the hospital wing!
Great chapter
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| Title: A Failure of the Heart
| 03 Mar 2010 2:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the discussions about parents! Perhaps it will make people think about their parents! I love the picture of Severus worrying over Harry at a game thank you for updating
Wanted to read the entire story before I reviewed. I so like this. You pretty well kept Sev in character, snarky and all. The only OCC moment I see is this last chapter, but it's within limits. I so love how this relationship is growing. I'm curious about Draco and Ron, maybe a friendship there because of their concern for Harry. If Sev takes Quidditch away from Harry there will be a MAJOR problem. Thank you for the great story.
This is a great story! I do hope that Harry will be okay and without serious complications. I can't imagine how horrible this must be for Severus to see Harry in such a state. They have just found each other and become a family. I would hate it if Harry lost his memory or worse.
Great chapter!
| Title: A Failure of the Heart
| 02 Mar 2010 6:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm just loving this story. You really get to the heart of the matter, and dig down deep, and you write Severus' and Harry's emotions. Well done.
I really have to go back and review the Christmas chapter, which somehow I missed, and I absolutely loved it! :)
Yay to updates! and this time I have remembered to actually track this! lol me and my brain urgh hehe cant wait for more :)
Oh, man!!! This is soooooooooooo good! I really, really love this story! And this chapter! Maybe Ron will calm down now. Can not wait for the next update!
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