Title: The Art of Cake Baking
| 13 Feb 2006 8:46 pm
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Hahaha!! Yum. I liked the way cooking was conveyed as a choice, something Harry could control while most other things were not in his control. I liked how Harry invited Snape to join him, and I actually did like how short their little cake eating time was, with little banter. It got down to the point and painted the picture at the end. You have some typos but I was still able to understand everything. Cute story! Harry baking cakes. XD
Author's Response: OMG -- I had typos?! *faints*
LOL, thanks. Glad you liked. ;)