Snape’s pain is beautifully done.
Beautiful short story! I loved the dialogue.
| Title: Dumbledore's Men
| 09 Mar 2011 10:02 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love this I wish it had happened!
Oh, that was very nice. I enjoyed the banter between them about who killed old Dumbley and the insistence of Harry calling Snape 'Severus' at the end. I also enjoyed the line about Snape not saying the word 'love.' Lol. Good job--I think I need to read more of your work.
-P.G.
I would love to read something longer from you. I really liked the two short stories I've just read.
This is really a sweet story, short, sadly but very very sweet!
That was very sweet and well written. Good job!
"This conversation never happened. I did not cry," his mouth twisted distastefully, "and I certainly did not use the word 'love'."
Probably the BEST line of the ENTIRE story. Which makes me ask, is there more to this?
Very good!
That last bit was so good, and I loved all the sunrise comments. They really paint a nice picture.
I consider you to be a very great writer, because I managed to get the emotions of this fic while listening to a fast, Russian pop song, Kak Hotel Ya, (By a guy named Dima Bilan, you should check it out!).
You are a very good writer if your stories can be that strong, lol.
Keep writing!
-Elise
I loved this story - so quiet, yet emotional. Infact I've found all your stories I've read brilliant in this way! Please keep writing them.
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