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Reviews For A meeting unlike the others
*chuckles* Awww that was cute :) I like the metal picture of Snape whistling (especially in a Death Eater meeting ROFL!) Great job, much love, Vana
I think you could expand it. In my opinion there's actually enough to make it at least a four or five chaptered story, and get the both of them to interact a bit more. It's still good as a one shot should you want to leave it like this though
This is good. I wish it could be a little longer. Also, I wanted to have more description about the sound whistling has for Harry. Is it horrible shrill? Does it make his teeth buzz with pain? But good story. We want more as always. |
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