I like your storylines, but I must say that your malapropisms are so abundant that there are huge chunks of writing that are incomprehensible.
Funny ending. I'm sorry I didn't review much, but I prefer to get to the end of an already completed story before reviewing. It saves me valuable time when I'm on a library computer. Kudos for keeping them mostly IC without make Sev a complete and utter greasy git.
| Title: Father-ish Prank
| 16 Oct 2009 11:58 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Don't let Sev hear you call him confused, or you might find yourself in detention for a good long time...or worse. *shudders*
| Title: Harry's Project
| 30 Aug 2009 10:59 am
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| Reviewer: flightoffancy (Anonymous)
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What the sense of doing a AU of one cannot change some of the original characters. I like the slight change as I have always felt that Rowling dealt with Professor Snape much too harshly. He was brave, very brave, loyal and he capable of loving. His Patronus proves that.
I am intrigued with the craving and am wondering were you are going with that.
Interesting story so far.
| Title: So it begins
| 01 Nov 2007 8:26 am
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| Reviewer: bookall (Anonymous)
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I liked this story a lot - the characterisations were great, but my one burning question is why didn't Harry carve Snape a box? Am quite pleased with the way it ended - and some of the bits are hilarious - i just loved the t-shirt idea.
Also there are quite a few spelling mistakes, which don't take anything away, just thought i would let you know.
| Title: So it begins
| 01 Feb 2007 10:47 pm
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| Reviewer: kyleigh (couldn't be bothered to sign in) (Anonymous)
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I just wanted to review and tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I enjoyed your wit and humour immensely. Your plot line, characterisation and dialogue was unique, creative, imaginative and innovative. I never even thought of comparing Snape to a dementor... and you also managed to reveal that tidbit of information but kept Snape in a positive light in the point of view of the reader - successfully I might add. I really enjoyed this story and I can see clearly from your writing that you enjoyed writing this story. :) Kyleigh
awsome story please continue
| Title: So it begins
| 25 Oct 2006 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Autumn (Anonymous)
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It was lovely :) I want a sequel:)
| Title: So it begins
| 25 Oct 2006 12:50 am
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| Reviewer: Autumn (Anonymous)
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It was lovely :) I want a sequel:)
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