Hey! Love your stories, :D The fact that Harry was hesitant about speaking up for Snape and didn't go all 'I'll save you!' made me happy, because it seemed totally in character. Makes me irritated when writers act like they had a good relationship.
Ron and Hermione are perfectly characterized! The banter between them made me smile, :D
That was the most brilliant ending as well, thank you so much for sharing!
But this would make it so interesting!!! Can you please continue? I can't wait to see how the rest of the Year would go. Think how the Occlumency lessons could change!
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| 09 Feb 2014 11:35 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Me encanto tu idea, y realmente la desarrollaste muy muy bien
| Title: Until Proven Innocent
| 03 Jun 2011 1:46 pm
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| Reviewer: sm1982 (Signed)
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Beautifully written.
Keep up the great work.
Would love it if you were to continue this as i would like to see what happens in Snape's office and how things progress!
SM
| Title: Until Proven Innocent
| 16 Apr 2011 11:24 am
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| Reviewer: Wendy (Anonymous)
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OMG, I loved this! It was really, really good! =) You kept everyone in character, and I loved how Harry got around the Veritaserum, and managed to tell Fudge that Voldemort was back. Great fic! :D
| Title: Until Proven Innocent
| 03 Jul 2010 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh very very nice I loved it!
yes well, i still hate you too snape. let us celebrate our mutual hatred.
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