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Title: Helping 05 Apr 2006 1:46 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is great, I love little Harry he's so adorable.  I also like Snape's character, he's good with kids.  Please continue, and great job.
Title: Prologue 04 Apr 2006 7:08 am
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you plan on continueing this because you caught my interest and now I want to know what's gonna happen next. please update soon.

    Author's Response: Yes, I plan on finishing this fic, no need to worry about that.
Title: Attempts at Comfort 03 Apr 2006 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, such a cute start!! :) Little Harry is so adorable. I bet he smells though. I liked how Harry just cried and cried when he was first left with Snape - why Didn't Dumbledore tel him Goodbye? Guess he was a coward. :P I loved how Snape sang to him. His thoughts are done really well, in character I think. Thanks so much for sharing it!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I was a little worried that I got to fluffy with the bathtime and all. Was it IC? I was worried about that too, thank you so much for the review.
Title: Prologue 03 Apr 2006 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start. :) I love how Dumbledore came in and talked to Harry for awhile and through that realized that Harry had to be removed. Both of your characters seem very in character.
Title: Prologue 03 Apr 2006 5:30 pm
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start!  I'm hoping that you update this fairly quickly, because I really need to know what happens next!
Title: Prologue 03 Apr 2006 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Spiorad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh great start so far! Keep up the great work!

    ~Spiorad
Title: Prologue 03 Apr 2006 4:02 pm
Reviewer: phantomsgirl04 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This is an interesting beginning-most fics such as these start with SEVERUS rescuing Harry from the Dursleys-it was nice to see Dumbledore going (although Minerva had to prod)

    What struck me about this chapter is the interaction between Dumbledore and young Harry. It was a slow build-up, and I like that you explained things slowly rather than 'Dumbledore appearing, sees Harry all covered in blood, and leaves' kind of thing. Good job! I hope to see more of this!

    --Phantomsgirl04 



    Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I always find those stories rather unrealistic so I purposely tried to nod do that. Thanks again for the review.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I find the kind of story you described unrealistic so I tried to go into it slowly. Thanks again for the review!

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