Title: The beginning
| 31 May 2006 6:33 pm
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Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous)
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Great start! Well as to what Albus' and Harry's reaction might be... both shocked I would say but I think Albus would be happy because Snape and Harry are now getting something they both need: a family. However, I dont think that Harry would be very pleased. He might push Snape away even more and be angry and frusturated, might even be scared.
I think you're story is great. I like that you had a whole bunch of stuff happen in the first chapter, because now it's leaving me to want more.
If you need a beta, I am available part-time. I can somewhat help with Briticisms, and with grammar.
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