Thatsa great story....
Never took Mickey to be the sarcastic type though....
"Don't do it! He could practically hear Mickey shouting at him."
Best line ever!
Great story so far...I love how you're staying in character
| Title: Set Forth and Sunder
| 16 Mar 2008 11:00 am
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| Reviewer: lidiladilom (Anonymous)
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This story is a highly beleivable one, and interesting too :)I like Snape-the-angry-wizard.
Wait, that's it? We didn't really get a conclusion...
This is an interesting build up, but I'm not sure where you're going with this.
Aaaw! So sad! But I absolutely loved it!
I now have two qoutes from this story in my bio, that's how much I liked it.
The French was very nice, by the way.
Keep writing, you are very talented!
-Elise
| Title: Solitude's Seconds
| 26 Aug 2007 4:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous)
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I have a question: how did you get the translation of Va-t'en, because as far as I know, I didn't think they had a word translator? GREAT JOB on the story by the way, next time you post, could you answere my question? please.
| Title: Deep Six
| 09 Feb 2007 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: marie (Anonymous)
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it was good, extremly realistic
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
I have to admit I lost interest half way through and mostly skimmed to the end of the story, but I thought I would still give you a review. It's not a flame in anyway, because I did honestly enjoy it until I started to lose interest. I don't think it was anything about your writing or the story that caused that, I just grew bored with the idea after awhile. A few things I wanted to point out that I liked was how Snape transfigured the bed for Harry -- that was very kind of him, teacher or not. It shows that he at least has an ounce of caring for Harry. I also liked the "making use of the many available vials" comment, haha. That was a good one. I come from a family of many boys, save myself, and I can't tell you how many times I've heard that one used before. It was so natural and perfect -- too bad Snape couldn't have charmed a bathroom out of nowhere, huh? I also liked the tidbit about Snape's mother being French. I was confused as to whether or not you implied that in your story Snape himself was from France, that his family lived there, or if it was just his mother, but either way, I liked that fact about his childhood and how he was able to tell Harry to go to hell without him knowing it, haha. Priceless. I do have to admit I was a bit taken back by Dobby's apparel -- he's one strange house elf that's for sure, lol, but it made me laugh.
Keira
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I love your honesty - in future I'll have to do something more to keep you entertained ... and put into the right context that could sound really dodgy, but meh, take it as you will. Thanks again for taking the time write such a thorough review, it's really apprecited!
| Title: Initial Inferno
| 04 Nov 2006 10:45 am
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| Reviewer: Tilly (Signed)
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