wayy 2 go severus!!
gr8 job!
oh nooooo poor harry things always happen to him!
awwww so sweet! loved the Sev and Harry moments
at least Ron and Hermione are being good friends im glad Ron didn't go totally ballistic :D
Great ending! Ha! Voldy got pwned!I have a bad feeling about Lucius though...
I can't believe Vernon showed up, how insane!
Harry has impeccable magic!
Off to read number three! Weeeeeee!!!!
So far this story has been great, but has had more than a few spelling errors and just a few usage errors. I'm quite intrigued as to what will happen to Harry when he arrives at the MoM. I'm kind of confused about Molly actually being able to see Harry, almost as if Harry, Molly and Voldemort were all connected...
I think a 3 week punishment of being stuck in a dungeon bedroom, only allowed to leave for meals and class is too much and bordering on jail like. I know Severus can be stern, but in this story he barely shows his stern side, so it's odd for him to all of a sudden issue an extensive punishment like that when before he allowed Harry to get away with more than enough cheek, amongst other things.
Great story, you are a good writer, but I think you may want to proof read one more time before submitting because of the grammar issues.
2:21 am this time. This is sooo good, I loved ever twist and turn of this fic
| Title: Visions, Fights and Serious Conversations
| 17 Jan 2011 7:22 am
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| Reviewer: xx (Anonymous)
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Thank-you!!! I have been waiting for a fight between Snape and Sirius for ages and this one was legend, it really was funny, it was even better that Lupin was part of it as well, I am was really happy that Lupin was back being a teacher and I am really going to enjoy the rest of the story and the next one this really was amazing, I didn't think I was going to like the truce between Malfoy and Harry but I really do, I always thought it would be better off being enemies but I believe you did every well xx
What a brilliant story! I can honestly say this is one of the best I have read - and I've read a lot! You write so perfectly. I'm not normally a crier, but (I don't know if I'm just tired because it's 5am and I've been engrossed in your story all night - I'm pretty sure it's your emotive writing style though) I proper cried on several occasions. Touching and heartbreaking :')
I'm kind of sad it's over now... 10/10 definitely. I'd give you 11 if I could. :)
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