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Title: The Conclusion 26 Mar 2007 8:09 pm
Reviewer: CheddarTrek (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really great story! I love the way you have characterized Severus. You've really managed to keep him in character, but still be this sort of person. It's amazing.

    I would like to see Harry have a little more interaction with Gryffindor and Hufflepuff, but since you did say once that Silas/Harry wanted that... Well, I guess it'll come up sooner or later.

    Again, brilliant job so far. Please keep up the great work. I love your Severus, really. He's a good brother/gaurdian in pretty much every way. Good at comforting Silas, getting him things, but not letting him get away with too much.

    I am curious what he'll do the next time Silas really needs to be disciplined though. I wouldn't mind seeing that... Perhaps at the end of the year? Philosopher's Stone still around? Heh, guess we'll see.

    Cheers
Title: The Conclusion 19 Mar 2007 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: The Conclusion 19 Mar 2007 7:03 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    There was a lot of important information bandied about in the text today. From the view of the pensieve, it seems the Chimera was not real, or at least that would explain how it dissapeared. But then, how could it be in the department of mysteries? The argument over accidental magic is still unsettled, but that's what makes stories interesting; continuing story lines. I can't help thinking that something important is just around the next update.
Title: The Conclusion 19 Mar 2007 1:56 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh good. From your chapter title I thought the story might be done, glad it isn't. Can't wait for more of the mystery!
Title: The Explanations 15 Mar 2007 12:02 am
Reviewer: Ontoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    it was fantastic
    uodate fast
Title: The Explanations 14 Mar 2007 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not a flame!!! The lights going out and Silas waking to see his mother was fast paced, but I hope you explain how the Chimera got in and he was hurt. That was so sad about Mikey, but even if he was accidental magic, why did he demand Severus hand Silas over? The rest made sense, but that demand still rings as out of place. Great plot development.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I realize it doesn't make sense. This plot line will be going over the next couple of chapters or so, and by the end, all your questions will be revealed. Well, the Chimera thing probably won't be explained for awhile, because I'm not touching that plotline until . . . Silas/Harry's third year. *sigh* Amazingly, I have it all (Well, most) planned out. Even why Mikey was acting strange. Not everything has been revealed yet :) What happened when Silas blanked out will also be explained next chapter.

    Hint: I leave small clues throughout the chapters, but you have to look closely. I'm glad you like the story!

Title: The Explanations 14 Mar 2007 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: The Haunting 05 Feb 2007 3:34 pm
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was awesome! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Title: The Haunting 01 Feb 2007 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very interesting occurance. A true Haunting. It seemed more like a restless spirit. Too bad Harry has to explain what happened. I hope they can keep it from happening again. The first case of a dangerous ghose I've read.
Title: The Haunting 31 Jan 2007 11:04 pm
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Poor Silas - no wonder he ran away instead of going with Severus to the Forbidden Forest!! And I thought at first that Mikey was going to be a good ghost!! Go!Sev for saving Silas and being there for him!! Great, great chapter in a fantastic story!! Looking forward to more!!

    Scarlett

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