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Title: Chapter 14: The Best Summer Ever 27 Dec 2006 1:46 am
Reviewer: violet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay! i love that hermione's dad wants to protect harry, what a good person he is! harry's letters to snaper were cute, and i loved snape talking to the potters' picture. :)
Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 27 Dec 2006 1:35 am
Reviewer: violet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i lied, i may have to comment all the time, because the pictures you paint with some of your scenes are just too wonderful!! harry crying in the infirmary and snape comforting him, and then what snape sees in the mirror...so cute! loved it!
Title: Chapter 4: McGonnagal Knew 27 Dec 2006 12:38 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]

    oh! poor little harry! i just found this story and am super excited to be reading it, i usually just comment on the end, but had to add something here. 1) i love this!! 2) you have a couple double s's and double o's in this chapter, which is no biggie, just typo's...but one turns as into ass...

    i'm off to read more! yay!

    ~violet 

Title: Chapter 31: Mischief and Mayhem of the Marauder Variety 22 Dec 2006 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how Snape was all cross with Harry at first, but then they were hugging. It was a touching scene. I really like your Madame Pomfrey and how affronted Harry is as a child when she tells him to take better care of himself. Tehe, and then she made him wait 10 minutes so he wouldn't throw up. Charming bits like that are so wonderful. Great job!
Title: Chapter 30: Second Chances 22 Dec 2006 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Remus is going to teach Harry. :D So the Dementors are affecting Harry rather badly... Harry really needs those lessons. I really like how Percy is looking after Harry still. :)
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 22 Dec 2006 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter. I really like how this showcased just how confused and wrong everyone was about Peter and Black. I really like your characterization of Remus. I still think your Hermione is great. Good job!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 02 Dec 2006 12:56 am
Reviewer: WolfDragonDemon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it I hope you continue!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 29 Nov 2006 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have one word for you: UPDATE!!!!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 28 Nov 2006 1:34 am
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That was a brilliant chapter! Can't wait for more!

    One thing I wanted to mention was the Snape nearly tripped up and called Harry 'my something...'.

    I was thinking, if you're going to have him start progressing into a father-son relationship, you should show some of Snape's thoughts as he starts to think of Harry as a son. It would be awkward if he just starts declaring to everyone and Harry that he's his surrogate son.

    I love your story and I can't believe how long you've been able to keep everyone in character.

    Good luck with the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 26 Nov 2006 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this.  Please update soon.  I spent my whole evening reading this instead of working.-but it was well worth it.  Thanks

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